[fic](Quiz) Assassins, Pirates and Ninjas.
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hakaisha
MASTERMIND: You're no mere assassin, you're the
head of the guild. Plans within plans. You
have an entry, an exit, and probably a large
bank account. Now, what do you plan on doing
with that kind of power?
Which Type of Assassin Are You?
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Be afraid. Be very afraid. muwahahahahaa. >D
*ahem*
Ficbit based off a comment inmoonsheen's LJ which spawned plunnies. ^__^
"Koizumi?" Hakuba looked a bit lost and confused, an expression that he habitually wore when he had a question about their school. It was taking him a while to adjust to the new school life and its idiosyncrasies.
Which the sorceress looked upon with much amusement. At least he was coming to the right person to ask instead of sitting there in confusion and having his brain explode like that one guy in class 1B last year. "Yes?"
"I think I just saw a Pirate walk by." He looked rather startled by this fact.
"Oh, them." She waved it off. "I'm surprised that you haven't spotted one before hand. They're at war with the Ninjas."
He blinked. "Ninjas?"
"Yup. But you won't see them." She paused a moment, considering. "Unless they're a very -bad- ninjas, in which case they don't last long cause the pirates get them."
"Are either of them in conjuncture with the sword swinging tiger-riding maniac?"
"Kurogane Yaiba?" She mused it over. The question made sense. "Not that I know of. He says he's a Samurai and I know that I've seen him take on either side for practice and laughs."
"And Kuroba?"
"Both sides stay away from him." She smirked. "They made the mistake of involving him and Nakamori-chan in one of their battles. He turned them all day-glo in retaliation." Kuroba had a very wide vindictive streak, particularly concerning things occurring to Nakamori that he disapproved of.
"I'm sure that made the Ninjas quite unhappy." He commented diplomatically.
"Oh, very. Especially since it wouldn't come off." She smirked, amused by the memory. Especially since he had added some polka-dots. Spotting Ninjas behind potted plants had also been great fun.
The blond's brows furrowed thoughtfully as he mused something over. "You wouldn't happen to be involved with either of them, would you?"
She smirked, leaning back in her school chair like it was a throne, crossing her legs at the upper thigh. "My dear Hakuba..." She purred, aware of the shadows playing around her as she let a bit of power slip. "Who do you think controls them?"
-fin-
hakaishaMASTERMIND: You're no mere assassin, you're the
head of the guild. Plans within plans. You
have an entry, an exit, and probably a large
bank account. Now, what do you plan on doing
with that kind of power?
Which Type of Assassin Are You?
brought to you by Quizilla
Be afraid. Be very afraid. muwahahahahaa. >D
*ahem*
Ficbit based off a comment in
moonsheen's LJ which spawned plunnies. ^__^"Koizumi?" Hakuba looked a bit lost and confused, an expression that he habitually wore when he had a question about their school. It was taking him a while to adjust to the new school life and its idiosyncrasies.
Which the sorceress looked upon with much amusement. At least he was coming to the right person to ask instead of sitting there in confusion and having his brain explode like that one guy in class 1B last year. "Yes?"
"I think I just saw a Pirate walk by." He looked rather startled by this fact.
"Oh, them." She waved it off. "I'm surprised that you haven't spotted one before hand. They're at war with the Ninjas."
He blinked. "Ninjas?"
"Yup. But you won't see them." She paused a moment, considering. "Unless they're a very -bad- ninjas, in which case they don't last long cause the pirates get them."
"Are either of them in conjuncture with the sword swinging tiger-riding maniac?"
"Kurogane Yaiba?" She mused it over. The question made sense. "Not that I know of. He says he's a Samurai and I know that I've seen him take on either side for practice and laughs."
"And Kuroba?"
"Both sides stay away from him." She smirked. "They made the mistake of involving him and Nakamori-chan in one of their battles. He turned them all day-glo in retaliation." Kuroba had a very wide vindictive streak, particularly concerning things occurring to Nakamori that he disapproved of.
"I'm sure that made the Ninjas quite unhappy." He commented diplomatically.
"Oh, very. Especially since it wouldn't come off." She smirked, amused by the memory. Especially since he had added some polka-dots. Spotting Ninjas behind potted plants had also been great fun.
The blond's brows furrowed thoughtfully as he mused something over. "You wouldn't happen to be involved with either of them, would you?"
She smirked, leaning back in her school chair like it was a throne, crossing her legs at the upper thigh. "My dear Hakuba..." She purred, aware of the shadows playing around her as she let a bit of power slip. "Who do you think controls them?"
-fin-
more edits
Date: 2003-12-09 06:04 am (UTC)"question about the school." -- how about just "school" or "their school," or just "a question"? Since you clarify in the next sentence, this seems repetative.
"it's idiosyncrasies" -- no no no! "Its" is the possesive. "It's is a contraction of "it is." Please get this right!
"the one new guy in class" -- "that new guy" sounds a bit better.
"He looked rather startled by the fact." -- "by this" or "by this fact" is smoother.
"Unless they're a very -bad- ninja" -- you've been using the plural, so "they're very -bad- ninjas" is better.
"particularly when concerning things" -- no "when" needed here.
"'My dear, Hakuba...'" -- no comma makes this more shiver-worthy.
I liked this! D'you also like comments on which parts were best? The line "He blinked. 'Ninjas?'" was awfully good. Hearing about Kuroba from such a source was fun and well done, and the last paragraph was definitely very shivery. Thanks so much for writing more!
-Ami-
Re: more edits
Date: 2003-12-09 06:57 pm (UTC)Corrections have been made. ^_^
Thank You for the edits!! ((GLOMPS!))