*applauds* Another excellent piece of writing. Thoroughly enjoying to read. Bet Kaito's going to wonder about things when ever he gets back to Japan. The itty bitty little grammaer Nazi inside me is screaming at Now to leave this some where because the 'this' stands along and doesn't say what 'this' is. Of course the note is implied but I've had english teachers ream out students on that.
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Date: 2005-09-04 03:00 pm (UTC)The itty bitty little grammaer Nazi inside me is screaming at Now to leave this some where because the 'this' stands along and doesn't say what 'this' is. Of course the note is implied but I've had english teachers ream out students on that.