[fanfic] That Blasted Red Stone
Jun. 18th, 2004 08:56 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
ickaimpSomebody talk the Voices outta this, PLEASE!!!!
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"Brother... Is that... is that it?"
"I think so." The small figure close to the shimmering red stone swallowed. "The Philosopher's Stone."
The larger shadow made a nervous sound, a rattle echoing in the small cave. "Be careful, Brother."
"You worry too much." The older brother chided as he stepped closer. With a grin that was equally parts nervous and triumphant, he put his hand on the red stone.
The light from the stone flared, bathing everything in the area a vibrant blood red colour.
****
"Wow...." The white clad young man breathed in awe from the rooftop of the highest building in the area. "This might really be it."
The red stone shimmered in his hand, as if agreeing with him. "Pandora..."
Swallowing once to settle triumphant nerves, he held the stone up to the full moonlight.
The stone lit up from within, bathing everything in the area a vibrant blood red colour.
****
The stone's light suddenly increased, an array drawing itself into the air around the stone. A powerful wind began to howl in the enclosed area, dragging its holder into the magical circle.
"It's booby-trapped!" The boy growled, bracing his feet against the stone floor, resisting the pull the best he could.
His brother reached out for him, grabbing an arm. "Brother! Look out!"
****
The stone's light suddenly increased, momentarily blinding it's holder as circles began to draw itself into the air around it.
"Is that supposed to happen?!" The boy yelped, bracing his feet against the floor, resisting the pull the best he could.
A door opened up, a taller blond-haired teen running out onto the rooftop, panting for breath. He spotted the other boy and ran towards him. "I've got you now!"
***
The taller figure pulled the smaller one away from the glowing light.
***
The taller figure tackled the smaller figure into the glowing light.
***
A deafening crack, like a lightening strike echoed in the small confines of the room as all four figures fell down like a stack of dominos. The stone, being held by the two in the middle, suddenly extinguished, falling dormant once more.
Silence descended in the cave as everyone lay still, attempting to catch their breath.
It was broken by a plaintive sigh from the blond boy on the end.
"Oh... Bugger."
-ende of finished mental pics-
All I know is that the Alrics are speaking German, Hakuba's getting mistaken for Human!Al, Kaito's running amuck and Ed's got a headache.
And we've got a couple of country songs stuck in our head, which wouldn't be so bad if the Voices would stop re-writing Big & Rich's "Save a Horse(Ride a Cowboy)" chorus.
"And I saddled up my horse and I ride into the cit-y. I make a lot of noise cause thegirls boys they are so pret-ty...."
.... Sorry Hakuba... ¬_¬
[Edit:] Y'all are prats, y'know that? -_-
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"Brother... Is that... is that it?"
"I think so." The small figure close to the shimmering red stone swallowed. "The Philosopher's Stone."
The larger shadow made a nervous sound, a rattle echoing in the small cave. "Be careful, Brother."
"You worry too much." The older brother chided as he stepped closer. With a grin that was equally parts nervous and triumphant, he put his hand on the red stone.
The light from the stone flared, bathing everything in the area a vibrant blood red colour.
****
"Wow...." The white clad young man breathed in awe from the rooftop of the highest building in the area. "This might really be it."
The red stone shimmered in his hand, as if agreeing with him. "Pandora..."
Swallowing once to settle triumphant nerves, he held the stone up to the full moonlight.
The stone lit up from within, bathing everything in the area a vibrant blood red colour.
****
The stone's light suddenly increased, an array drawing itself into the air around the stone. A powerful wind began to howl in the enclosed area, dragging its holder into the magical circle.
"It's booby-trapped!" The boy growled, bracing his feet against the stone floor, resisting the pull the best he could.
His brother reached out for him, grabbing an arm. "Brother! Look out!"
****
The stone's light suddenly increased, momentarily blinding it's holder as circles began to draw itself into the air around it.
"Is that supposed to happen?!" The boy yelped, bracing his feet against the floor, resisting the pull the best he could.
A door opened up, a taller blond-haired teen running out onto the rooftop, panting for breath. He spotted the other boy and ran towards him. "I've got you now!"
***
The taller figure pulled the smaller one away from the glowing light.
***
The taller figure tackled the smaller figure into the glowing light.
***
A deafening crack, like a lightening strike echoed in the small confines of the room as all four figures fell down like a stack of dominos. The stone, being held by the two in the middle, suddenly extinguished, falling dormant once more.
Silence descended in the cave as everyone lay still, attempting to catch their breath.
It was broken by a plaintive sigh from the blond boy on the end.
"Oh... Bugger."
-ende of finished mental pics-
All I know is that the Alrics are speaking German, Hakuba's getting mistaken for Human!Al, Kaito's running amuck and Ed's got a headache.
And we've got a couple of country songs stuck in our head, which wouldn't be so bad if the Voices would stop re-writing Big & Rich's "Save a Horse(Ride a Cowboy)" chorus.
"And I saddled up my horse and I ride into the cit-y. I make a lot of noise cause the
.... Sorry Hakuba... ¬_¬
[Edit:] Y'all are prats, y'know that? -_-
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Date: 2004-06-18 09:19 pm (UTC)Won't!
Date: 2004-06-18 09:39 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-06-18 10:16 pm (UTC)So write. Write!
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Date: 2004-06-18 10:17 pm (UTC)o__O And that kinda sounds intriguing... Wonder what ppl'd do seeing a Human!Al lookalike who goes around fighting crime instead of doing alchemy. :)
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Date: 2004-06-19 12:04 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-06-19 12:15 am (UTC)^^;; But yeah, ain't gonna talk the Voices out of this one. Sorry. :D
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Date: 2004-06-19 12:23 am (UTC)You know you want to. Come one, it's a brilliant idea!
Brings a whole new meaning to "dog-pile on the Kid" too :-)
::snicker::
Date: 2004-06-19 01:07 am (UTC)Yay! Voices Goooood!
Date: 2004-06-19 01:15 am (UTC)The dynamics with Kaito and Hakuba thrown in... ::snickers::
Roy and Kaito plotting = scary scary things ::snicker::
Or Kaito and Hughes collaborating?!
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Date: 2004-06-19 01:30 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2004-06-19 04:20 am (UTC)I got to ten.
On the plus side, the idea is no longer driving _me_ crazy.
-socchan
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Date: 2004-06-19 09:15 am (UTC)And prats or not...
Date: 2004-06-19 07:56 pm (UTC)Re: And prats or not...
Date: 2004-06-20 01:51 am (UTC)