ext_9773 ([identity profile] tdei.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ickaimp 2006-03-10 04:23 pm (UTC)

Re: Corrections

::coo::glom:: And in the minutes before I rush to class. ('cause I see spot some) ::groggy::

Is O'Neill really spelled with 2 l's? :O? ::had thought it was one X3::


He sighed as he crouched down, shaking their hosts shoulder.
host's

"-He's- not like that. There's just some... stuff going on. Work-related stuff"
Forgot a period. :D

--they needed to get to a laundry mat sometime soon--
? Not sure if that term works. Laundromat, in case maybe not. :O

"Ready." Saguru announced. "Thank you for your hostpitality."
hospitality

Saguru grabbed the bag that Kaito had finished packing, shoving his feet into boots and wrestling his coat on in an ill-cordinated dance.
ill-coordinated

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